initial idea number 1

something similar to this but going up into a peak triangle

My first idea is about this man who sales vegetables on a market stall or a green grocery store. however this man has issues as suffers a bad case of OCD he catchphrase is 'everything has its place' as he believes having a neat systematic life is the way to go. so one day in the evening say 5pm. A woman is on her phone talking to her Boyfriend letting her know that she is preparing a special dinner. She goes to green grocer and is picking up a vegetables and she comes to a pile of potatoes which is stacked orderly. The woman scans the potatoes looking at them carefully trying to choose the correct one. she complains that it is dirty and asked the man has he got any fresh ones. At this point he feels made and anguish and mutters his catchprase. The woman askes 'what?' but he says nothing and takes her round the back where there is "fresh potatoes". She is looking in the bag in the meanwhile he is behind her and attacks her from the behind with a brick and shouting that 'everything has its place'.

 At the beginning we can use a tracking shot of the woman from the behind walking and at the front, to the greengrocery talking on her phone but we segment take her body to show her vulnerability. Which we then cross cut to the man standing in the middle, but, we use many angles on his face to capture his obsessive crazy, disorderly behavior. Then he starts staking the the vegetables where the credits start to begin while cross cuttin back to the woman in danger.

The opening structure is a narrative opening sequence.